All Comments on 'Honey Belle Ch. 01'

I made an account just to comment. You write the best seduction scenes I've ever read. I really hope you continue writing stories like this and the other recent ones like it (the tavern / interrogation stories). The pacing and progression create so much exquisite tension, a long slow burn that just keeps mounting until it finally ignites. Your female sexpots are a dead-on blend of playful, coy, and commanding -- the tone is perfect there. And the best thing of all, I think, is that the hypnosis finishes off a seduction scene that is completely convincing even without the magic. Yes, it's non-consent / reluctance, and your caveats about that are well-taken, but it works so well as a fantasy, because it's never exactly clear how much of the victim's surrender is driven by his mind being taken over by someone else, and how much of it is him just willingly yielding to his own desires, now that they've been stoked so intensely that it feels too good not to, and he himself realizes that he would never want it any other way. I'm not even sure that our hero at the end there, punch-drunk with pleasure and lust, would consider himself a "victim" at all. It's so wrong, but it's so hot! More like this please!

Fantasy_Fan: Thank you so much! That's really what I go for. Fey and demons effect the ambiguity of a dream, where you can imagine you're unwilling even though really, it's your own desires doing it to yourself.

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