All Comments on 'Honey Suckle Heather'

Loved the story and hope you add more chapters!

I love your story. Keep it up.

seriously a pretty sexy idea. However, please spend some time on your writing (not saying this in a discouraging way), it needs more love for words and sentences and structure, and above all for tension (sexual and not) in the plot created by those sentences. At the moment it reads like somebody handed in a work report, when really what you want to do is to entice people to commit to that fantasy and spin it further in their minds. To get turned on by it.

Keep on writing and practice!