All Comments on 'Honey, We Need to Talk'

Well Done

Are there really people like this out there? Sluts, skanks and horn dogs are one thing. Why would anyone ever stay with someone this screwed up? In either direction.

Lmao, very funny! Good one, Bebop.

You totally reeled me in with this one. Didn't see either the first twist (she's in on it) nor the last one (he's her brother). Great job!

Finally a good story on this site.

@Peelercrab

"Why would anyone ever stay with someone this screwed up?"

Didn't you read the whole story? It wasn't very long. She is his sister. Can't break up with or divorce your sister, can you?

Actually, these days, I prefer the lighter fare. That was nice.

Lol love it

Pure class

I enjoyed this. I don't think anyone has pulled the sister thing like this before. A five of course.

carvohi

Beautiful twist.

One of the best” honey we have to talk” stories I have ever read. 5 stars!

I continue to think this is one of my favorite stories.

😂😂😂😂😂

Great

So much missing!

The point of this chopped up lit is what?

What about the 5W's in writing a complete and conclusive story to excite and suck in an audience, and keep them coming back for more.

This had sooooo much potential and it was wasted!

Best flash story ever! ***** 👍🏼 😂

Great short, with possibly the best end twist ever. Massively underrated. Thanks, Bebop. 5⭐️s.

Wow, a great take on the "Honey We Need to Talk" meme. Perfect set up and then the totally awesome twist at the end. Thanks, Bebop. Tanglosax

Love how the sister uses brother to dump boyfriends. 5 stars

Loooove this take on the cliche.

That was pretty good for a bug brother thing and guys that won't take no for an answer/

This is just fucking outstanding!!!!!

very fun!

Original.

Multiple readings, still one of the best on this site. Thank you.

WHAT A FANTASTIC STORY! I DIDN'T SEE THAT COMING FROM 1000 MILES AWAY! WHAT A HOOT! ONE OF THE BEST!

Haha. I really love this.

Amazing! What a turn of events, 5 stars!

I loved it

Hahaha....you really got me.... you really are the best.... Definitely a five star 🌟💫🌟💫🌟💫🌟💫🌟

Funny, liked it.

Funny as hell. 2nd time I’ve read it and it just gets better. Keep up the good work. MtM

I enjoy this story even when I know the ending. It's fun!

LOL Brother and Sister, never saw that coming.

THAT, was funny!

Ho Ho Ho... you got me. Thanks for that. I can only give you five stars though.

Love it!

Ha Ha ! loved it ! 5 Stars !

Ah, so good to read once in a while something light and without filth.

5/5

What a fun little story. A totally unexpected ending. Great writing. An easy 5-😊😊😊😊😊

For such a short story, it's amazing how many people seemed to skim over the twist that she was his sister, not his wife.

Thanks for the chuckle!😊

😅😂🤣🤪😁 HILARIOUS!!!

Still laughing...

Laughed my nuts off.

This is great! Unique and fun!

Hilarious! Quite a twist. I wonder if Nora is also his sister or actually his wife. Very creative twist on an old trope. 5 stars.

Sooner or later, he is going to find someone bigger, that kicks his ass! Wouldn’t it be a better bet, just to announce he is the big brother, and to stay away from his sister? 4 stars.

LOL Sister, great

Yup, it worked just fine. Good laugh!

That was great! I never saw the twist coming.

Qwik with a delightful twist. I smelled husband at first, but her brother....nice.

Well that was a jolly good read. He's right about one thing: she is a psycho bitch. :) "Creative" if that makes her feel better. This break-up scheme will backfire at some point. One of these days, Cheryl, one of these days...

VERY creative. A fun read. 5 stars. DMW aka

Nice. Give stars for a well developed shot short tale.

JPB

Hehe. Freaking awesome!

This was a good one, sister hooks up with guys that won't let go and brother scares them off. Short and sweet!

Nice twist.

I loved the originality. Well written too.

Loved it. Big brothers are good to have on your side.

Which is worse, A jealous husband the jerk thought he was, or the protective big brother that is actually was.

OK I did not see that one coming. Very original. Kudos!

Great story Bebop. We need a new one.

That was fun!!

Hilarious!! Never saw it coming. 7 stars, because I can, but it was too short. but then, I don't know what you could have done to make it better. More, Please. I'm now a big fan.

The BEAR