All Comments on 'Honey, We Need to Talk'

That Cheryl sure is crafty. Great story. Thanks for the laughs!

I guess you have to get the decoder ring to have a clue. Two stars

this was funny as hell, great story

Oh my gosh, I had to laugh for 20 minutes. Excellent story.

Fun read with a nice twist. Well done.

Both of you posted new stories lately. Both of you tried for comedy. There's actually a couple of funny lines in this story. But let me give you the standard anonymous bullshit. They're not married. You're in the WRONG category. Too many damned cliches. Too stupid for words. A god damned SEAL? Trying to tag qhml1's story was a waste. Some of the other authors you hinted at will probably want to kick your ass. Now I just hope you guys don't screw up St. Paddy's Day for us Irish. Damn!

I'm not sure anyone has taken that angle, not that I've seen at least. I didn't see that twist at the end although I knew that there was going to have to be one. 5 stars good story, entertaining, well written and plenty of humor.

Still would rather read about Alistair and his crew.

ending. Well done.

Well, that was fun. You don't see too many original takes these days. We'll done.

Thanks for the story

Cog

good really different.

a real good one 5 stars

Flashy and damn good. Didn't know which away you was going with that one.

Enjoyed the twist at the end

You got me again. I knew you were messing with us, but I didn't see the sister part coming. After most of the other stuff posted this morning, it's so good to laugh at a story instead of about them. Really great stuff Mr Bebop3.

Great laugh 🤣😂

Thanks for the laughs!

Loved it!

Bloody Brilliant! You had me going! I knew Mark was soon to be for it... Navy Seal, back to prison? Awesome big brother! Brilliant!

Thanks for posting a different take on the "We have to talk" theme! Well done. Great flash story. Well written and different. 5 from me.

Thanks for the mention of the March 17th Highway Song event. In spite of many requests, I will be posting a story! It's just two weeks away!

PLEASE stop writing this wasnt good or funny just stupid.

Nice twist. Funny. 5*

Nice add of the usual tropes (SEAL, past prison time, etc) - kept me laughing while reading...

5/5

Well done.

Really good twist on the LW story line.

Bebop3 always comes through. Thanks for the story.

Fucking awesome

The brother reminds of Andy Sipoweiz! Great light story!

on the strange car in the driveway, honey we need to talk plot line. Very well done and I'm flattered to be included as one of the diversions. All that is needed is a mention of a South Pacific paradise.

Thanks for the fun story.

Woodmanone

Well played, sir!

Gave it 4*

Thanks for writing. Enjoy your stories

Heh, I was going to correct your spelling of "mishegas," only to find that "mishegoss" is also correct!

Cute story.

Crazy and different. Thanks.

You suckered me in and I bit the hook. Open end of an open marriage? That guy needed to get lost.

I liked it!

Loved the twist at the end.

Thanks.

You see people? A four is not that hard to get if you don't take your shit too seriously. And if you don't make it shit. I don't care what she was wearing. I don't care what size her tits are, the color of her hair, and I sure don't give a shit if she's wearing Jimmy Shue (Shoo, Shew?) shoes. Writing is easy, once you learn how. Learning is difficult. You get what you earn.

I was wondering where this story was going, 5 star finish.

OK a bit different. I didn't see that ending coming.

I'll bet Mark made a wet-mark in his pants on the way out the door.

Love it. 5*

Great to chuckle first thing in the morning. Bebop does it again!

Nice spin on the car in the driveway.

I did not see the plot developing like that.

GREAT story line.

LMAO!! Too funny!

I don't care about the fucking category ;-) Keep writing!

Stupid fun is entertaining so thank you!

Bad story from a BlackRandi disciple. Kiss much ass lately? Oh, wait, it is hard to kiss your own ass.

Nice twist!

I'm one of the "other" authors mentioned in the story. I'd rather buy Bebop3 a beer than kick his ass. Especially if he provides the BBQ. One sure way to knot for St. Patrick's Day ruined for you is DON'T READ ANY OF THE STORIES from the event. Good job Bebop3. Keep em coming.

Woodmanone

That was great, keep up the good work!

5starrs

Questions

Great story but It does leave me with some questions. What did Cheryl get up to with the infamous Barry, and what really happened on the boat in France

What a great read - you had me going there and then I had a great laugh!

There were no ninjas. Story reported for not having ninjas.

Quick entertaining read. Well done.

Didn't see it coming.

Nice change-up for you.

Hooked

Very entertaining, Well done

Yeah,okay it IS in the wrong category, but that's why it works -better than being in Humor and Satire. Still darned funny.

5* Dramedy!? I enjoyed this original plot. Never saw it coming. Ignore the idiot anon haters.

Funny, too!

A new twist! She’s not his wife but that doesnt spoil the fun.

LMAO! God I hope he's fucking her because she needs it bad. Fun little twist.

What the hell was that they both need should have got the bat on them

Good one!

Personally thought it was Great! LMAO funny nothing more then a Brother helping his Sister.

do u and HDK live together? lol same story, same result. ok writing, wrong cat. neither one was very funny to me but i would have to give it to HDK's his was just a tad bit more funny

5*

Great storytelling I am still smiling!! Thanks for sharing.

Great twist on an old theme. Thanks. 5 Stars.

I want to read a variety of stories about a man who is quarantined and becomes suspicious that his wife had been cheating on him until his being quarantined with her put the brakes on her cheating. I can imagine insightful conversations with his children who have much to say about mysterious "uncles" who stop by to visit mom in her bedroom...or mom being late to pick them up from school...or their having to wait outside until mom and a strange man unlock the door.

Love it!

But you actually managed to write an original, 'honey we need to talk" story in the loving wife's section.

Well played good sir!

Anonymous because to lazy to signup

Reading this perfect little story.sgain. As difficult as it is to believe, posts to LW are even worse than when this was written. The world has changed in three months, but humor hasn't. Great story.

I read your comments to other authors. You aren’t good enough to bloviate as you do.

Loved it, hilarious!

Didn't see the story going where it did, Short and Sweet ! Well Done

I can usually smell a rat as a story unfolds, but this one got me. Well done. At last something original! 5*

Would say "And now for something completely different. Signed: BTW

This was pretty awful until the twist at the end. That alone gave it five stars, at least from me.

Like HDK said, it was fun, nothing like sibling love.

Clever AND funny. Thanks for the chuckle.

Ninja Anon comment was funny as well

This author is one of the top tier on here

Whoa...wow.

You sure did make a 'damn fool' of myself....Whoaaaaaaaa

Full credit for the penmanship....

A june bug to my windshield!

We need to talk grabs me like a love bug to a radiator in the Spring I find it difficult to pass on we need to talk stories.

But this is by far the best!

I tried to score it a 5,,But!!! My my cellphone touch screen lit up 4 before I touched 5.

I really hate touchscreens!

or was it a ruse to get out of giving it up. TK U MLJ LV NV

And, for once, I agree.

It was in the right category, otherwise the people would have been onto the “joke” sooner. Well done.

Three tropes in one story: "gotta talk," "car in drive" and "day started bad."

Plus a nice twist ending, 5*****

If she did or didn't, doesn't matter. Can't really cheat on your brother.

Creative

Freaking awesome!

Baited me, I nibbled, you set the hook and reeled me in. Fucking Great!!

Boy, did I enjoy this story. I thought it was going to be same-o, same-o, but was I wrong. Thank you for a very creative and imaginative story....and entertaining story.

You put the bait in the water, set the hook and then hauled us in, the only thing lefg is the cleaning. Superb

But who’s “Nora” that’s mentioned in the story? No, not Nora the editor. Nora as in, “...can stay here and keep Nora company.” Unless of course they are one in the same. Well, even then, who’s Nora?

that was a quickest way to get 1 star I've seen so far!

Great

Loved it.

You had me hooked and Played to the max.

I love the originality of this story. The "Honey we need to talk" stories are provocative and stir strong emotions, but very unlikely. This story puts a whole new twist on the idea, and I can easily see them playing this game. I do enjoy it!

Ha ha ha ha.... Interesting

Short and perfect

Big bro... Little sis

5/5!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!11111111

Very nice. I like these light-hearted tales now and then. Bravo!

Very nice