All Comments on 'Honeymoon'

Boring.......

Pathetic.

Unfortunately, everything else about this story is ridiculous. Better luck next time.

Subject worth 3 billion but possibly 20 times that would make it 60 billion. A simple Google search of net worth has Bill Gates at 95.4 billion and Buffett at 87.1 billion. Dwarfing your character's worth. Your story just got more ridiculous after that somehow.

Don't write again. You really have no concept of a good story 1*

I have been reading stories here for years, I have no words to describe how bad it is. Please don't do this anymore

Because I love it. I am sorry he does not get to eat rods cum any more but there is so many men in need of a good cockslave and he will find someone

the ending was stupid.. would never really happen.. messed up the entire story..

also the rich mans body guards would have killed that boy.. be real.

Honestly wish it said forced. Might have made for a better story if after he beat the asshole Barton, Rod treated the trophy wife sweeter and she questioned why he mocked Barton so horribly. Or even if she acted like he shouldn’t act so big when he’s probably the same size and when he takes it out her jaw drops and she can’t take her eyes off it. In this case he’s just a bully rapist and it’s so unbelievable it’s laughable. Sometimes literotica is better if has hints of realism or if it is more realistic.

I didn't even finish it, you think a person like Barton would have put up with that, sorry the world doesn't work that way

Yeah sorry this story is SOOO unbelievable. Someone with this amount of money have guards who are making 6 figures yearly. Even if they did not take the guards on vacation (unlikely but this is fantasy) once they got home the guards would be there, not to mention a thousand lawyers board directors etc who would easily prevent any of the ending from happening. Really got to say the ending was really the worst part of the entire story.

What cruel prison governor put a keyboard in front of you to allow you to show every one just how stupid you are?

No need to repeat what others have written.