All Comments on 'Honeymoon Cruise'

More please we need a sequel

You did a great job . I would love to read more.

Sure wish I could get my mom away for a trip such as this

Well done especially considering you have only posted two stories. I look forward to your next one.

Very well written and well developed. You tell the story from both sides so very well. Please write more! It was well worth the 5 stars.

This was a really hot story. Hopefully, you will write additional chapters about Anna and Roy. Possibly, they continue their sexual relationship in the days ahead in her marital bed. However, she now has her eyes on other young men, who are her son's age and younger. While, he now has a fetish for screwing older women who are as old or older than his mother. He especially now has the fetish of shoving his big young cock up their ass.

I haddent thought of a sequell untill now. I have more to post but the editers are working hard on then getting them ready to be published. again thank you for your comments.

Perfectly told love story. There only seemed to be two "holes" - (1) would loved to hear the description of placing the rings on each other's fingers and saying the wedding vows, (2) birth control is always the unspoken question - is she protected during the trip? Please, please continue this awesome sensual story!

Loved the story, and hope you will consider developing it.

Rgds Al

it is a palе copy of Love Cruise by TheSexualDeviance

Keep the story going.

Anna needs to be pregnant with Roy's baby by the end of the cruise

Loved this one - hoping for a sequel...

Great story, would love to read the next chapter.

Roy is a wonderful son.who truly loves his Mother. It is a wonderful story and happens more than many people think. Erik is an ahole and deserves to be stuck with bimbo secretary and young kid.

Sorry to disabuse you of the notion, but I've been reading the Incest/Taboo stories on Lit for about 7 or 8 years, now, and there are probably a dozen or more stories where the son winds up accompanying his mother on a cruise that was planned either for Mom and Dad as a second honeymoon, or for Son and his intended bride (who ran off with someone else at the last minute) as a honeymoon trip. Face it; there are only so many ways that you can really write that scenario. This author didn't do too bad a job, with the plot - though he really needs to find a better editor, as there were plenty of mistakes in spelling and grammar that slipped through the 'editing' process.

I gave the story four stars out of 5 - which is more than I gave "Love Cruise," because that author's idea of the "mass public marriage consummation" ruined the story, in my opinion. At least this author kept the "wedding night" behind closed doors, in private, the way it should be between any two lovers.

The only similarity is it being a mother and son on a cruise. Not sure why you think the have anything similar in premise. Maybe actually go read it before commenting 😂

Great story would love to read more.Congrats.

Please make a part 2 of this

What a wonderful story! I would definitely be interested in a second part! Five stars and favorited!

Love the story. Hope to read more.

Dude, you can't stop just as the story was getting hot! You need a followup chapter detailing what happened on the rest of the cruise and when they got home!

G OOD READ I ENJOYED IT, IF YOU HAVE MORE LIKE THIS ONE. LET US HAVE IT, AND KEEP THEM CUMMING.

..... THANK YOU.....

I don't want to be a spoiler on this

honeymoon cruise coming home is being written.

you all can thank yourself for this as I had no intentions to start a part two.

for those who hate Eric.... well wait till you see what happens to him.

also someone asked about knocking up Anna. Well she takes the shot monthly. i hope she remembered to take it last month.

guess we will find out.

thank all of you. i have never had success like this.

thank you.

R.L. Benton

This is what Love is all about, we can help whom we love. One of the best mother son love story I ever read. Thank you

I really wanna know what in your mind for chapter 2, which you should definitely do.

Five Big star

No sense of reluctance, no realism. just rushed.

Saved a lot of reading that you started at the end.

The whole thing worked out perfectly, especially the size of the bed. I can only imagine if I were in a similar situation, how much I would enjoy fucking my hot mom's pussy.

kind of surprised that there hasn't been a part 2 or even possibly 3 to this story. it was a great start and could have been so much more if you continued.

Anna and Roy are having a good time right now watching Cozumel disappear behind them. they might get off in Progresso. but Anna is really having a great time with a young hansom viral man that is loving every second of there time together.

anyway don't want to spoil anything here. please be patient....

Oh that was so hot a story and so well written. My pussy is so wet and i need to change my panties. xxxooo

Good reading. When is part 2 coming out ? Would like to see what happens

They need a baby/babies...

please I need a beta reader for part TwO. and am a little stuck. my editors are busy with xmass so I am pleading for help.

if you are interested please

press send feedback and leave an email address so I can send you my initial transcript for it so far.

lee

Great story. Sure we want more. How their life continues went they get home from the cruise. Whether they move to a new town where no one knows them. Maybe a child is born. How they live out there life till death. Yes, we want more chapters. Do u really think it would be fair to leave us hanging?????

I would like to read more please!

Loved this story. Please, give us more!!!

having a hard time getting it edited. have mostly written a part two. but cant find an editor to edit incest stories.

lee

More please. Loved this and wish you will write many more chapters...

we love this story. hope that you continue with a part 2 at least

Lovely story, good writing. Please give us another chapter if you'd be so kind.

an interesting variation of a common theme

Please continue, there is just so much more than can be done with continuing.

Going so well too, was really enjoying the story. Except for the spoiler at the beginning.

Why do writers have to spoil stories by changing POV? Stivk to one person or use 3rd person all the way through.

Absolutely continue

In all seriousness? Is he threatening his father with violence even though he only wants to talk to his wife? He'll have to leave the house to her for the divorce? Why actually? I thought the son is of legal age? And if I didn't miscalculate, did his mother get into when he was 13? And is she going on an incestuous voyage with her son? She even marries her son on the ship? I don't know what dreamland you are in but your story is just a SiFi story! You know yourself that in New Orleans incest between mother and son is punishable by at least 15 years in prison. A call from the father to the authorities and the two go to jail. And for the threatened violence against the father, a few hired people are enough to kill him half! And if he does not want to understand this warning, there are other means. Also, I can't understand how a mother can go from loving wife to incestuous whore within a week! But it's your imagination. For me it doesn't have the slightest trace of credibility and so it's not good either. If I want to read SiFi I go to this section!

A very nice story, I like it a lot. AAAA++++

An interesting premise, that needs some considered thought before the author puts further pen to paper. As a stand alone piece of fiction it is great. Congratulations on what has been published.

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@mattenw

RE: In all seriousness?

You thought this was a true story? You don't go to jail in a fictional story for any reason unless the author writes that way!

Great story. I gave it 5 stars. I just wish mommy kept her stockings on.

Nice read and thanks for sharing.

Exciting and joyful. Fantasies like this make incest stories some of my favorites. Thanks for sharing.

Keep writing.

MLJ

What a surprise, the dad character is a cheating piece of shit. In a relationship with his secretary. Drowning in clichés here. Oh and he's knocked her up, too. The trifecta. Not really surprised but this is really overused as a plot device to let the mother go off and do something with the son.

"AAAWWWAWAAA", OK I've never heard that being uttered from an orgasm. Sounds like he's in pain. Made me chuckle.

Glad there's still more to the story. Part 2 up next. Hopefully it's good stuff.

It's a well written story. I am enjoying the storyline.

🙊🙈🙉

Honestly would’ve enjoyed this more if it stayed on the mom’s POV. A bit random how it shifted part way through the second page.

Great story. I love the mention of stockings.

Great story with a happy ending!

I loved the way Roy stood up for his mom with his piece of shit dad. The asshole would've deserved being knocked all over the porch!

I really enjoyed all the sincere loving chivalry Roy gave his deserving mother on her cruise of a lifetime. It gives me some faith after finding so many awful trashy vulgar stories on this site.

Excellant! 5 stars!

Sincerely,

B4PW.