All Comments on 'Honeysuckle Cottage'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago

They went from insults and complaints to screwing too fast for my taste I just could not get over that

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

I really enjoyed this one a lot. I wish it had been continued.

DarkkBrothaOneDarkkBrothaOneover 1 year ago

Good story (although as a Yank I have a little issue keeping up with the English slang). However, if I have any issue that keeps this from being 5 stars, you failed to add backstory to their sexual relationship. Obviously this isn't the first time the two have been intimate. In fact from the way they interact, it's safe to say they possibly had a previous tryst in that house. Perhaps it's just my own little nit pick, but I would've liked to hear more about how this got started, just to add more weight and gravitas to their current relationship. Either way, still a good enough read. Keep it up!

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Hi Sparks is now available at amazon. I promise new material will be available soon. Kind regards MELD