All Comments on 'Hong Kong Adventure Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
proof read

Proof read before posting the next chapter. It's common that for orgasms/etc that the accepted version is "cum" but in some locations the author has used "come" a simple flaw corrected by proof reading.

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Likes writing and reading erotic literature... always happy to respond to feedback