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All Comments on 'Honor Thy Mother & Thy Father Ch. 14'

by Prolonged_Debut10

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AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Poor dialogue

Get an editor.

The dialogue is still detracting from the story and making the characters seem like high school num nuts with a limited vocabulary

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
I Hated It

What Stephano was unforgivable and to have him spank her was so wrong in so many ways. He is still an abuser and she deserves far better. He still thinks might makes right. I'm done reading this series.

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