All Comments on 'Hope'

I loved your story it really got me hot

What a beautiful and compassionate love story! Thank you very much.

This was a very well done story - the characters weren't driven by the erotica but by realistic attitudes and expectations. I'll look for more of your stories.

Oh what a beautiful story. There's nothing quite like a story where "Hope" springs eternal. I've got to hand it to the author for spinning such a sweet winter's tale of a lovelorn lesbian hoping against hope to bond with a stright would-be lover. The subtle eroticism was on the slow burner here, which made it all the more delicious when the fires of passion were ignited between these hopeful lovers. This story is only the second submittal by this author, yet she succeeds in creating an authentic work of lesbian erotica. Thank you for adding such a fine piece to our genra.

Jane

What a well written story. I loved the slow build up to a wonderful climax at the end. It was very sensual and sweet with a feeling of intense love. Thank you.

I loved but it ended too soon. Perhaps a continuation is called for, yes?

Sweet and suspenseful. Love it! :)

so well written, so erotic and honoring the process. I loved it. I look forward to more of your stories.

I liked this...a lot. You're a good writer, good storyteller, a little rough around the edges with grammer and typos, but very easy to overlook considering the content. I'm very curious to see what happens next, but then that was the point, wasn't it? Speaking as little as possible while saying it all.

Good storytelling and a very nice buildup for both characters. The waiting and wondering made it all the more erotic.

..it was such good storytelling. Yes this is the nearest I have ever seen to the 20 year old story by Katherine V Forrest. It is NOT plagiarised at all, as the story differs in many ways, but the sentiment and the brooding setting are wonderfully similar. What is it about sharing a log cabin in the silent snows of a ski resort? Excellent writing and thank God, done with an easy pace where tensions were allowed to build and not forced. Sofi xxx

Great! Very sensual with a great setting and buildup. 5*

This was a beautiful story -- more please.

The last page was very intense.

What a great pleasure to find yet another writer on this site who believes in the slow build-up. A well-written and genuinely erotic (as opposed to pornographic) story. I'll read your other stories soon.

Despite the grammatical errors, it was a nice sensual slow-burn of a story. Hope there's more

Small steps to a satisfying end. Liked it