All Comments on 'Hope'

So intuitive to what could happen. Only so much a man can resist. Please continue

The arousing story here would be the tension caused by his daughter's first asking and his giving in for the first time. That's where you need more embellishment.

Well, if the liberals in California would stop washing their trash they wouldn't use so much water... Recycling is fine and dandy, in theory. The truth is that using potable water to wash trash before sending it off to the recycler is a waste. What can't just be eliminated during the smelting process can be washed with non-potable water on a more efficient scale at that point.

Sorry for veering away from your story, but you kind of veered off into stupidity after the water shortage and it's not really worth talking about...

Well, if the liberals in California would stop washing their trash they wouldn't use so much water... Recycling is fine and dandy, in theory. The truth is that using potable water to wash trash before sending it off to the recycler is a waste. What can't just be eliminated during the smelting process can be washed with non-potable water on a more efficient scale at that point.

Sorry for veering away from your story, but you kind of veered off into stupidity after the water shortage and it's not really worth talking about...