by AriaLOVEScheese
I was just wondering about the boyfriend who is never there for her, I guess he missed out, this could be a good series hope you will keep this going
This is a very good start to what hopefully will be a continuing story. I really enjoyed the story. You should get into what happened to the two before and interaction with "ex" boyfriend. Should be interesting.
These girls are geared for pretty much anything, yet they’re so nice, so down-to-earth. The way you portray them in your stories, they seem so innocent and yet they go completely nuts. Very cute and hot.