All Comments on 'Hopping into Puddles'

What a lovely story. Romantic, touching and sexy. You're a great writer.

but simply delightful! Keep it up!

Great start! I'm hoping there's more to come?

...would love to see more like this.

enjoyed reading it. more chapters?

I loved this story as I have all of your others. Is it going to be continuing? Bringing back in her ex/his best friend.

WCD

I love all your work. This was a nice read. I hope it continues just a little bit.

Girl

You have a gift that I am glad you are sharing with the rest of us. I hope there is more in the future for these two!

Is there more? If not, then this was a beautiful story! I would have liked to see the look on the jerks face when he seen them together! Great Job!

I enjoyed the song, after listening to it twice, then I couldn't finish reading the story without the song in the background. The story was ok, it was a short story, you know quick and to it,and I enjoyed it. Story could have had something more to it. Though all in all I like your writing.

good story, I played the song in the background while reading the story, nice.

I never feel the need to comment, but this story just changed that. This story was amazing and I know it's been a while since you wrote, but I am begging you to continue. This story is one in a million and stories like this are so hard to come by now-a-days. I'm really interested in Aiden's and Bryn's future. So for the sake of my sanity and the sanity of other readers I am begging [which is something I NEVER do lol] PLEASE WRITE MORE TO THIS EXCELLENT STORY!!

This story is different than your other ones, and I really loved it. The fact that you mentioned Supernatural made me like you even more...I Love that show, Jensen Ackles is a fox! Anyways, back to the story, I loved how you created pictures. I loved the description of them in the rain and playing the park. You wrote it in a way, it was like I'm watching them from the sidelines. Well done, it was really cute. It's one of those stories that makes you want to put in a sappy romantic movie and curl up in a blanket with a box of Kleenx. I really enjoyed reading this.

A little closer editing for mistakes would make it even better, but I really liked it.

I've have read everything you've done and I love it!! I really love the hartley stories..And you have intoduced me to some amzing music! Thanks keep writing

It's amazing when you realize that what you have been looking for is and was right there in your face all along.

I love the best friend angle. Sometimes the best friend is the best man.

Even though this definitely stands alone. Love it

This little story gave me such a warm glow all over. Thank you. I wish there was an epilogue and that Aiden kicked Jonas's ass!

I know you probably won't see this, but I want more of these two! This is so sweet!