All Comments on 'Hormonal Surges Ch. 12'

I really love this story an thanks for adding more pages

Amazing as always. Thanks for listening to our feedback and making the chapters longer. I get lost even more in the story now. Can't wait for the next chapter. You are a brilliant writer.

more please, I love this story

Yay, 2 pages!!!!! More more more. :)

about time you added more pages. i was actually wary when i read this chpt because i wasnt allowing myself to get engrossed in the other chapters because you always cut me short but thanks to the other page i was able to take in more of your story and i can say that chpt 12 is my fav jus because of the extra page and because for the first time since readin your series i really enjoyed readin it

I know that we asked for a longer post, and so when you put two pages, rather than one, and skipped a day, I was not concerned. However, I am now having withdrawal after a second day with no update. Pretty please!

so chapter 13 has been rejected but i can fix ir easily but i currently dont have internet so its going to be awhile until the next chaper is up. sorry.

I need more of this fantastic story, please update.

And thank you so much for writing

To Femate's comment. Can you go to the local library, perhaps? Another question: With the absolute crap I see on here with zero storyline and overt racism, sexism and violence toward women, what does it take to get a rejection from this site? I really need to know.

I just read the whole thing and I eagerly wait for more!

Write more please!!!!!!!

That's it? What happens? Does she actually go back to school? What about the baby? So many loose ends! Need more!

more please I can't wait to read more

Is that it? There has to be more!! What happens with the baby? What do they hear from the other mated couples? Does she go home with him? Will there be a happily ever after?

I just read your 12 chapters and can't wait for more. Please don't keep us waiting long.

I have been waiting for your return since you left college to go home for the summer. I understand that you do not have the internet at home. However, surely you are back in school by now.

This looks like it may be another story to add to the "never going to be finished" file. What a shame. Not to mention the time wasted on it already.

I mean submitt please? I am really enjoying this series and want more.

Grammar remains to be an issue but I like the story.....a lot !!

Stephen J

Is it time for us to write this one off as a story that will never be finished?

Great story! I would love to read more about this.........