All Comments on 'Hornes Syndrome'

I think the story is wonderful with a very interesting twist in ideas. Dreams like that would be wonderful.

I really liked your submission about siblings sharing erotic dreams. While a bit odd, it kept my attention and left me wanting more. Thanks for sharing your talent.

Not bad, but blatant stuff like Halo 3 in the Playstation console, c'mon. not great but not bad, maybe a little more description of the intimacy acts

Very nice story, I liked it... thank you very much!

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She's a light sleeper, but she was stripped and felt up in her sleep? I'm a light sleeper- no WAY I would sleep through something like that!

how can they do it in his bed when she's married

I love these stories so much, that I can not stop reading them to the end. They are really great and I look forward to continue reading as long as you keep on writing. Thanks For All You Are Doing For me. BILL

It seemed to make more sense this time. It definitely deserved the Five Stars I gave it.

I hope Horne's Syndrome was written as a tuneup for your later work, "We Have to Talk," because it does not measure up to it. The old saying, "You can never go home again," does not apply in this case. "Talk" is so far superior to your first effort and dream sequence writing, that it is almost like you had a ghostwriter do it for you. The tempo is stilted, and the coordination of paragraphs disjointed. As I said previously, I will continue reading your work, because I enjoyed "Talk" so very much.

Prolonged_Debut10

Not to sound stupid, but Halo 3 is only on Xbox 360. It was a fantastic story though.

One thing - What you described is fraternal twins. Not paternal.

I really enjoyed this one.