by IvoryTusk
Once again, I praise your writing production rate! It is a thrill to see a story from you every day. I love how gritty and real yet sophisticated the dynamics are in this love story and story about family! Bless xoxoxo keep going - you're an incredibly amazing writer! P. S. Yaaaay I got to favourite this chapter first!
These chapters have all been very underrated. This is a great story that would do extremely well as a movie. Another chapter that is very easily worth 5 stars.
Brilliant chapter. I am on pins and needles waiting the upcoming (fingers crossed) scene between her and Zack.
It feels a bit like the future state of our country the way its going...
And also picked up some references to Reading, I think? That's my hometown, although I've not lived there for a while.
Anyway, really brilliant writing - getting into the heads of the main characters so well.
It's very awesome you picked up on that - yes, Reading is David's hometown.
love is forgiveness and caring and not making excuses just accepting. good story