by Goldeniangel
These short pieces you write are quite strong. I say that for one reason. You open with the action. The longer stories you write suffer from too much info dump at the beginning.
And that is a common problem a lot of writers have, but your short pieces have great openings. I recommend diving right into the action on your longer work, same as you do here, then after the reader is hooked, give the background and extra information and things like that.
Now that's what you call a short but SWEET tale of reliving all that pent up tension. And frustration. 5 glorious 🌟's 😍😍😍😍😍
And "who needs men anyway?" Not me, I haven't any fucking use for men at all!!
Goldeniangel, I just want to thank you for the 12 beautiful lesbian sex stories, that you have written.
I'll check your site here every so often, who knows there might be a 13 or 14..
(lol) lots of licks_Taliea.
I WOULD LOVE TO READ MORE ON MIA AND ROSANNA. THIS SUBMISSION WAS SHORT BUT I LOVED IT
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A tad short, (i.e., not long enough to get off), but nice all the same.
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