All Comments on 'Horny for My Son'

by brucewayneegypt

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

A good story

But not everybody will like it

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

WHAT MOTHERS THINK ABOUT THEIR SONS

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

Nothing To be disappointed about, nothing to be thrilled about.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

I liked both this and imagining My mother

After this please write sexting meghna aunty part 3

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

a shameless mother’s desperate cry

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

Halfhearted effort

AlwaystabooAlwaystabooabout 3 years ago
40s, the second coming of age for women, especially mothers.

When this happens often the closest and most convenient person is her son, and sometimes daughter.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

expected more

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

this must be your slut mummy

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

If a son can fantasise about his mother, his mother can fantasise about her son.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

Sentences don't make a story. Build and flesh it out.

Ending with the juvenile THE END says you're not a good writer, but that's evident. Find an editor to help you build your stories.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

instead of mentioning a set of instances where the mother would have lusted in real, you focused only on what she thought, and wished to do. I think that made this feel real.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

pure nonsense, Do something! Don't just think about it.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

DONT WASTE OUR TIME WITH THIS SHIT OF YOURS

ASK YOUR MUMMY, SHE WILL TELL YOU A BETTER SLUT STORY

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

Don’t keep her mind tamed!!

You had set it up well, just needed to think of a better ending

A proper encounter where the son reciprocates the feelings would have made this so much better

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

Dear Brucewayneegypt,

Please try to complete your pending works than submitting not so great stories like these

From a fan of your stories

Anonymous
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