by brucewayneegypt
I liked both this and imagining My mother
After this please write sexting meghna aunty part 3
When this happens often the closest and most convenient person is her son, and sometimes daughter.
If a son can fantasise about his mother, his mother can fantasise about her son.
Sentences don't make a story. Build and flesh it out.
Ending with the juvenile THE END says you're not a good writer, but that's evident. Find an editor to help you build your stories.
instead of mentioning a set of instances where the mother would have lusted in real, you focused only on what she thought, and wished to do. I think that made this feel real.
DONT WASTE OUR TIME WITH THIS SHIT OF YOURS
ASK YOUR MUMMY, SHE WILL TELL YOU A BETTER SLUT STORY
Don’t keep her mind tamed!!
You had set it up well, just needed to think of a better ending
A proper encounter where the son reciprocates the feelings would have made this so much better
Dear Brucewayneegypt,
Please try to complete your pending works than submitting not so great stories like these
From a fan of your stories