All Comments on 'Hostage'

Pleaaaaase :(

Please stick to scenes instead of plot. The idea of this guy being so powerful that he can threaten and attack cartel people with impunity is asinine. They are not just "obsessed with death" but like most organized crime, with loyalty as well. Isaac acts like a diva and divas die.

Otherwise, strictly as a flash story, it was fine.

Maybe a begining, middle, and end.

This was amazing!!

This calls for a part two. I like that Isaac doesn’t use crude words while staying in character. This was just beautiful.

I think I want a man like Isaac. He knows how to treat a woman and the sex... my gosh! I'm melting just thinking about it!