All Comments on 'Hot Dad on Playground'

Super hot story!!

We meet every single day at the same ole time in the same ole place.

This was a very gripping read - great sex and hot story line.

This is fantastic. Your writing and the pace of the story are brilliant.

Tension, sex, thoughts, excitement - you hit the mark!

Really well written. We all know what was going to happen, but your writing made it super hot. Thanks.

Sexy and hot. Excellent writing.

WoW, a masterpiece.

I love short stories which leave much

to one's own creativity.

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