by brittany_luv
Powerful, Sexy & WAY TOO REAL! The way u were able 2 convey ur female characters luv/hate feelings 4 the male, her fear/anticipation of fantacy bcomming reality & her confusion@the end was perfect! Even w/o the teachers pov u made it just clear enough wut was goin on in his mind. It's scary 2 think how many find themselves in such a situation. WHAT'S WRONG WITH US?! U for writing it & me 4 reading it lol Whatever our issues, i enjoyed it very much! THANX 4 SHARING!
This was written so long ago but it's literally my favorite story on here yet.