by blackemerald94
Mark...wtf...you've confused your characters! He is Jon, not Mark. It was such a shame as it brought me out of the moment. Let me know if you need a proofreader.
Hi everyone and thank you for your comments. I sincerely apologise for the mistake I've made- completely unacceptable and embarrassing on my part! Jon and Rebecca are based on characters I wrote about years ago, and that someone leaks through in quite literal ways. I have submitted an edited version of the story which will hopefully be posted soon. I hope the story was enjoyable otherwise, and my apologies again.
This is amazing. Makes me cum every time. WHERE IS CHAPTER THREE THOUGH?!?!
You are an amazing writer. I feel everything the characters feel when I read your works. This is a masterpiece. PLEASE CONTINUE. Or make another series. I will read and enjoy everything you'll post. Bookmarked.
Thanks one and all for your patience! Chapter 2 has been submitted for publication, so should be up soon I hope xx
I love these stories that show how we feel and the emotions we wrestle with and that we REALLY want it, too!
Very well written and I am going to continue with part 2 as soon as I can.
It left me thirsty...