All Comments on 'Hot, Hot Tub!'

Now that's what I'm talkin' 'bout! Good job....loved it.

As a Yank, the Brit English of the description and dialogue felt rather turgid; more like legal or clinical in nature, which tended to dull the erotic effect for me.

I did like the concept, set-up and characters, though, and found it to be believable as a situation.

Great, great story, perfectly describing my as-yet unfulfilled fantasy: to find myself in an MMF threesome where everyone pleasures (and receives pleasure) from everyone else. Also just read your other story about the "coffee visit," and loved it too!

Loved both stories, keep writing!

The story is perfect very hot!

Best story i’ve read. What me & my wife want.