All Comments on 'Hot Lesbian Athlete Seduces EMT'

AH....MAY.....ZING!!!! SO HOT!!! The romance, the slow burn seduction......

What an excellent start. This story is very well written and exciting. I look forward to seeing more from you.

Like what you are doing here; can imagine happening and the sex well crafted/intense. Gain only a glimpse of the main characters — would like to get to know each, and yes continue to develop characters and the romance.

Very nice, would enjoy more chapters.

Great first effort, I'm sure it will continue once they get their breath back

outstanding first effort love to see how they progress as a couple

Great first story. In fact, great story whatever the number. I liked the slow build up and the thoughts running in Ali's head.

The actual seduction was a bit short, seemed the discussion over dinner was as quick as the dinner itself. The physical part was done well, and there seems to be a future in this relationship. Any plans to develop it more?

All the best

Ally (no relation 😉)

Fantastic Tale, I'm looking forward to seeing more from you. Thank you for sharing your vision.

bow chicka wow

Great story. Would love to see more from you. Amazing. Thank you for sharing.

liked it, continue... Please

PLEASE CONTINUE that was one of the best stories i have read, perfect mix of story and sex.