All Comments on 'Hot Night, Hot Neighbour'

I noticed this was your first story. Well done! Love the excitement you generated in such a short time.

A very good first story. Well written

I enjoyed that. I have read many of your stories on other sites. Glad you've made it over to Literotica.

Your first contribution to Lit, but not your first into erotica. Enjoyed a couple of your pieces on another site, both of which were pretty intense. This short piece is an erotic engagement with an almost humorous aside toward the end — moans all around the complex. Compared to stories you posted elsewhere, the sex/erotic scenes are not only short in length but also short on intensity/sensualness; missing engaged dialogue maybe. That said, still liked it and glad that you are sharing your imagination here.

Very nice....yum.

Well done with the first story. I don't miss the Adelaide heat waves.

A nice quickie, the only thing is how are they seeing so clearly in the middle of the night? Perhaps it was a full moon? I feel like for me as a reader you could have given it more power with stronger

A hot little scene. Nice writing

Very hot short story, but loved how you have written it. Maybe you can follow it up and tell us what happened after 10 the following day

Love watching lesbian sex, especially pussy to pussy. Your story made it very real!

Thanks fun

This is a concise summary of a short but hot encounter and you didn’t give yourself the space to be descriptive or to develop the characters. There was enough here though to demonstrate that you are a capable writer of erotica. I look forward to reading more of your stories.

so sensual and hot and to have you recommend it to me yourself makes it even sweeter. I cannot wait to read the rest of your stories.... you have a gift my new friend

Very well written short story with lots of vivid descriptions

Not a fan of short stories but this was good.

A real quick!