All Comments on 'Hot Night on the Beach'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Read before submitting

"moister"? "pushy"?

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Bad

Jeez. Seriously juvenile writing as stated by the other writer. A 'fresh pushy' as opposed to a rotten one? Spell check maybe? Help in writing? Graduate from grade school?

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Wow no balls anonymous reviews

Mr. and Mrs. no balls anonymous reviews, let’s see your story’s, oh wait don’t have any? Dam idiots put your balls on before reviews.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago

Wow, looks like someone can’t handle criticism like a mature adult just like they can’t write like a mature adult

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Delicious tale. Thanks.

Ed

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