All Comments on 'HOT SHOTS: M.I.L.F Spring Break Ch. 05'

Eager to read what mischief awaits Shawn in the next chapter of the HOT SHOTS series.

Do people really get off on guys who are complete submissive bitches? Good writing, good sex scenes... couldn't get over the guy being a bitch all the time.

Please tell me something good happens to Shawn, your stories are cool, but why is the male lead always treated like shit? Can there be one story where your lead is the good guy, but doesn't take shit from anyone no matter what, that would be cool.

Maybe you want to check out my Dirty Dawg Series starting with the Indian Intern and the Big Tit Derby. And you probably should read 24: Chapters 2-4 for starters.

Please finish this story

Need to finish this story....

I enjoyed ch.s 1-3, but it all fell apart in the last half of 4 and continued to disintegrate in 5.

If you ever produce a chapter 6, please don't make it such a downer.

Yes please continue this tale as indicated. TKS

One full of intrigue and suspense. Who knew the "scout" was only after a piece of ass. He should be fired. As for Shawn, he should grow a fucking brain. He has power over these women and does not fully realize it yet.

Anyways hope the is a part 6.

PLS keep on writing this story to the end.

Really Liked the Story with the twist. Could you keep it going.

please continue

Just Finished Reading.... Great Story But The To Be Continued ? Are You Going To Finish The Series ? :)

more plz

Gambit275

You're missing one more chapter as I did a number six

What happened to shawn?

What happened to daisy?

What happened to her mother and 2 teachers?

I'm not bothered about dicwad Chad, maybe he loses his phone.

What happens to the new lady and child? Does shawn and her start chatting.

Please write 2 more chapters to finish it off.