All Comments on 'HOT SHOTS: M.I.L.F Spring Break'

IS IT STEVE OR DAVE GOT ME LOST THERE.

I fucked up. It's Dave. So do I listen to the troll and take this down or keep working on the other 4 Chapters? I'll let the audience decide.

Continue please I loved it

What a self opinionated, clueless, no-hoper dumbcluck your 'hero' is.

are not exactly what we are looking for on LITEROTICA. But hot stories. And this one could develope into one of these. We are looking forward to the next chapter. Thanks!

Thanks for sharing. Some guys are just lucky!!!!

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Funny story. Nice job.

Sure we want hot stories here, but Shawn is such a total fish stick ass clown that he cuts the heat from the story by at least half. He should have never made it past the knotted end of his father's condom. Finish him off in the last chapter getting gang raped by a gay biker gang. He's unlovable and unlikeable

I enjoyed the sex, the humor and the twist at the end. Shawn IS an idiot but he's likeable anyway. Was looking for older women/younger man stories and this hit the mark!

Signed, Hopefully a MILF

Nice work; keep going.

your terminology is very crude - sounds like a child wrote this