by Lazorrita
Too much like your other stories. No character development. No real good reason to even suggest there is romance involved. Just another story that should have gone to Erotic Couplings where someone might have gotten off on it bay-bay.
well anonymous, I am just starting to figure out the ways to use this website. wow - gimme a break! and it IS part of a whole book So back off
screw your juvenile ¨character development¨ bs overused meme.
this is an action story.
5 stars