All Comments on 'Hot Soup'

Good as always. I all wet because of it.

You should make a sequel detailing the after effects

I loved the ending.

This ones just BEGGING for a sequel, it seems she really liked her "boyfriend" so i really wanna see how she handles this

her acts are ripe for those words or similar words to him. in any case, he should be done w her

into the multiple times. Any chance of reconciliation when out the window when she took his cum bareback. Cheating on you is one thing, Taking bareback sex and rising STDs and HIV are another thing. Taking a man's cum and risking pregnancy is about as low a woman can go on the man in her life. This is the time to fold'em, cut your losses and find a new bit of fluff, this one has a new puppy tail to suck on.

into the multiple times. Any chance of reconciliation when out the window when she took his cum bareback. Cheating on you is one thing, Taking bareback sex and rising STDs and HIV are another thing. Taking a man's cum and risking pregnancy is about as low a woman can go on the man in her life. This is the time to fold'em, cut your losses and find a new bit of fluff, this one has a new puppy tail to suck on.

The story does seem a bit too short. I read some comments about sex being just sex, but the truth is that a relationship is built on trust. He obviously couldn't trust her and she so easily lied to him. hmmmm... there is a breakdown even without sex.

I gave it a 5.

can u PLEASE add a sequel?

surprise me

Crappy ending.

This is the wrong catagory for this,but what should it be. I am confident he leaves her and former friend behind, like last weeks newspaper. No it was only sex, w/e; and minimal ties there to walk away from

Where's the rest of it?

Your could have gone a number of ways with this story but you picked the lamest of them all. Why didn't you give the boyfriend some balls rather than make him look like a total loser (of course in this story, he is. On all counts).

He should have walked over to them and poured the soup down the crack of his ex-best friend's ass to run over his jewels and down on Jill's cookie. Even though it wasn't hot anymore it would have been a shock to their systems either way. Why have the guy run away rather than at least have some type of confrontation. That type ending could have saved this worthless piece of trash. You have him running away like a whimp.

This has got to be one of the worst endings on this site. Wow!1/2*

The first part of the story was a good start then BANG, it all came falling down. When to get nothing but sex talk you lost the story. GARBAGE!!

Who gets the apartment? Who gets the girl? Who gets their ass kicked? So many possibilities, so little story.

Damn really wish this had a sequel was amazing build up

Hot Soup may be exceptionally written, and it does deserve Five Stars for the quality of the story telling, but it is an obviously UNFINISHED story. Does Jill get back together with Alex? Is Alex really an innocent victim in all this? Does Jill stay with Steve? Or does Steve dump her because he never really cared about her as a person? The reader is left wondering.

I ended up making this story the opening tale in a series I call "Betrayal" and continue it from there.

I love this story!!!