All Comments on 'Hot Threesome with Twins'

Very well written, scintillating, even, then the sex started.

After that, it was predictable, repetitive, and boring. Our lonely woma, alone with two über studs, was stretched every which way, from all angles. There was something missing, it wasn't fresh. Your lead up was scorching... The anticipation was left literarily hanging.

Your potential is out the roof, your writing is genius at times, and some times not.

Loved all of the scenes. Very, very hot! Do you see any more adventures for them, as a duo or trio?

Please let us know. Does ginger show off Adrian's baby bump

It was an amazing, stimulating ride. I loved the sex scene(even though it was a bit predictable). The getting pregnant part, with a guy who you know literally nothing about, was the one thing is disliked in the story.

The beginning was delectable, though rough in a few places where an editor would have helped the story flow better. I have to agree that after a while too much sex doesn't do much for a story. Too much detail doesn't draw me in, it makes me want to skip to where it ends and the characters start interacting with each other as something other than sex machines. I can understand the drive to want to have children, but with a man she doesn't even know? This kind of put a real damper on things for me. A woman that age should be pretty well grounded and this behavior just doesn't seem to fit.

Keep going. I'm sure I'll find something you have written that satisfies.

I liked the premise. But I get off on people talkin to one another.

More of that and this is one of my favorite stories.

Loved this. So hot I have to read it again.