All Comments on 'Hot Tub Trio Ch. 06'

But you need an editor. Glad to help!

Wow ! Such good writing and, it seems that almost no body has read your stories. At least, if they have they don’t comment. What a shame because your erotic writing is far superior to 95% of all those I’ve read on this site, and I’ve read thousands. On thing that takes away from the mood though is your many miss spellings or wrong words. I know it’s too late for what you’ve already written, but you seriously need an editor. It’s impossible to do it yourself. You have the rare knack of being able to bring your characters to life. I feel like I know Chad and Amy, and even the new character Lucy. Your erotic descriptions of sex and accompanying emotions are so real and add so much color to your stories. Loved it. 5-😊😊😊😊😊’s again.