by daprich49
Great story and great writing. I'm already looking forward to the sequel!! Soon please.
ChristieP
Great job!
I just can't wait for what will come next... Well written, interesting story, it just has that spark...
Thank You.
Vupka.
That was the best. That dream…I was completely taken. Never thought it was just a dream. You’ve got talent. Looking forward to the rest. Keep up the great work and thanks for sharing.
Great build up at the beach and dream. Loved the ending.
Can not wait to read part 2. Swimming at Mrs. G's :)
I like your writing style. Thanks
Really enjoying the story - looking forward to part 2. Nice local twist for me with the Halifax references. I live 30 minutes away.
nice , I loved and iam waitting for more ...smiling ...very nice !
Yet another great story. More chapters when you have time, but please make it soon!
Very promising beginning and really looking forward to the next instalment.