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AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Very nice...

...but it would have been good to read about what she could see through the window, people looking up and noticing etc to enhance the sense of exhibitionism.

ConnorProject2K18ConnorProject2K18almost 6 years ago
Excellent!

While I understand the arousal of not being able to see, and being guided by your other senses, I would have liked the main character to be able to see herself being watched by people outside the window.

But all around a great story!

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