by Loristwosides
Very hot and intense love the fact it was in a public place but yet has the delicious secrecy of it being late at night in the ballroom, the illicit liaison, that made the story much more sexually heated...
i loved the story . loved forbidden fruit and reading it through a sexy womans eyes
If the gentleman truly wanted to help he would of given me his name. He could be my proof reader. But no. Just bitch and moan.
Another good idea ruined by poor grammar ! You need a proofreader who has English as a first language.
Shoreguy