All Comments on 'Hotel Hijinks with an Heiress'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
well told

Write more, please. Excellent setup.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago

A good story. A bit too formal. But good.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago

You provided a more detailed descriptive narrative of everything within the story except the actual sexual encounter. I was expecting the sex scene to be far more steamy and intense.

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