All Comments on 'Hotel Pavane Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
Arousing and erotic and engrossing

Your stories have just the tempo and development that stirs me. Great series and now you have third entry as "Reverse Masquerade". I hope you can milk many more stories from this theme of tapping and unleashing her inner desires. And thank you, thank you for your contributions to this community.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Emotion

Incredible hot but with such raw emotion!!! Stunning or a word the story maybe begs...extraordinary!!

MsQueenMsQueenabout 11 years ago

Amazingly awaiting The next chapter

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Really great, but...

Great writing! Am working my way through all of your stuff. Just one little thing bugged me. In Ch1, he was clean shaven. In Ch2 she had his pubic hair in her mouth. I know, picky. But thought perhaps you might want to change that.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
WOW!!!

What a wildly sensual and touching story--Thank You

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