All Comments on 'Hotel Sapphira'

Well constructed and very hot.

One of the most intensely erotic stories I have read in so long. From the very beginning, I could feel myself getting wet as the tension built more and more. The only complaint I have is that it ended too soon. PLEASE write more!!!!

You have done it again with yet another brilliantly composed piece.

Somehow the un expected always happens within your stories... If Only I could write so well!

That was too delicious for me to comment on...

~MDA~

Always enjoy your new submission; I know they'll very well written and incredibly sensual.

Really a very good,well written story,as being a submissive myself I Loved it very sensual.

JennyCD

Very erotic story. You are very talented in what you write. I have been told by more experienced writers on this site and others, that people who wish to write should write about what they know or possibly experienced. I would like to think you have done something like this at some point. Of course you could just have a very good imagination. Anyway the story worked for me on several levels. Please continue writing.

Julia, I loved it and it affected me just like I was afraid it would.

Riki

Great to see that you are still writing. You have a lovely style - there is a sensuality in the way that you choose your words that I love. For me they could go on for ever.

R.

marvelous tempo

The narration was wonderful. The tension built exquisitely.

I believe this might be the sexiest story I've ever read, and I've been reading stories on this site for about 10 years now. Why oh why can't something like this ever happen to me...

Just when it was getting good !!

Your writing is incredibly sensual, charged and powerful. So different than the usual "Cookie cutter" stories. Encore!! Encore!!

. . . very hot.

and she had nowhere to go as she was naked :-)

wish / thought it was me.that cought the eye of this businesslady

The best story I read in a long time.... No wonder you are the best at this..,, would love to read more such hot stories from you... xxx Shelly

Yup. You made a mess of the ending. It was going so fun but you didn't understand the sensitive narrative towards the end. More isn't always merrier.