All Comments on 'Hotel Turned Her Slut Ch. 01'

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vickitvohiovickitvohioabout 4 years ago
nice

I gave you 5*s simply because you didn't put this in Loving Wives. lol

finely_craftedfinely_craftedabout 4 years agoAuthor
Thank You

Will come up with it's part in about 15-20 days. Keep reading and following

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
A Suggestion

This is an interesting story, and I read in salahuddin collections. The story will be more interesting if you can rewrite from wife's perspective cuz it'll narrate the readers what was going thru her mind, why she gave in at last. It's my suggestions, if you have time you can rewrite or you can mix both husband and wife's perspective something like that.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

Please post the second part...eagerly waiting.

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I'm Male 24, from India, location classified - don't want to share, my creation are some fiction, some inspired from real events. I have a girlfriend who helps me in inspiring with stories and equally participate in editing my stories once finalized.