by amofiga
A really intriguing beginning.....Although I would give more information about Jean & how she fits into all of this. Has she already been with Phil maybe? After 25yrs of marriage, I don’t see Mathew just throwing it away for a chance to fuck one of their best friends. You’d think Tonya would have said something too, at least an offhand comment about how it might screw up their friendships. Story may be more believable if Mathew was divorced or widowed & THEN fucked his best friend’s hotwife
...over what Phil and Tonya MAY be doing or what it MAY be like to be with Tonya, versus telling what did happen or their dialog leading up to it.
Could have been condensed to maybe
one half to two thirds of its present length.
Paul in Oklahoma