I'm sorry, there is no desire in the story. You've just humiliated the husband and have no respect for him. I won't be reading any further of your writing.
Just a young man with a very high imagination for sex!!! All of my stories are fictional, but one is true. I love talking dirty! I might not have "proper grammar" nor do I speak as a stuck up snob! I am just a good old boy that has a simple mind. I write down what is in my hea...