by LushLuscious
Wow, this story was amazing! I really felt for Ana and Xavier, and was so deep in the story that I needed and had to finish it in 1 go! To figure out what had happened to Xavier and his future with Ana. Love love loved it!!
AMAZING!!!! Please make this into a novel!!!! Such a unique concept and so addicting!!
😭 this is One of the best I ever read here.
I love to read more this story had more chapters
This story is so amazing. I’ve read it twice now in the last two days. Just so good
A very good love story featuring a ghost and passionate sex. Please continue to write!
Amazing! I’m sure that I’m not the only person wishing this was a novel or even a Netflix series/movie! This was great! It was sweet, sexy, suspenseful.. everything rolled into one. This was GOOD!
this deserves to be made into a film or even a longer, more in depth series... this was truly, so good, and had me crying w Ana too<3
5 stars.
I normally stayed away from reading about haunted house, but real glad I decided to read this. Xavier sounded like a dream.
This is my first time here and to admit the truth, my mind's blown by the quality of the story. I couldn't stop reading it. The characterization is done so well, I legit fell in love with Xavier. His innocence, his passion, his love. This story has such a high potential of being a novel. But meanwhile I'm going to go read other stories of yours! Please do let us know if you're writing on any other platforms as well, would love to read more from you.
What a beautiful story! At first I wasn't too sure about this but I'm glad I read it all the way. I agree with other commenters that you should consider a novel or at least more chapters to this!
I have no words.
I'm amazed.
I'm in awe.
I fell in love with Xavier.
Please continue this story.
Damn! This is actually a sweet one! Kudos to you author! Your story made me smile and blush at the same time🤭.
This has been one of the best stories I have read in a long time, the raw emotions confessing each others love, the pain or being alone and without each other. It was a brilliant story to read and a tear jerker too! I loved it so much.
Wow! Just wow. I loved this. You have a talent, author. I could feel their passion and love. This was very well written. You should definitely pursue at least a side career in writing novels. This was a lovely read, and I'm happy I found it.
•My name is Ana…
•I look like the description of the girl in the story…
•I just finished renovating my home on the east coast…
•I uses to live in California…
•One of the past owners of my current house was named Xavier…
•He disappeared a few months after the house was built…
•Since moving in, I keep seeing a man that matches his description in the story.
Is this a sign???
I had just finished reading this, and I must say this was the BEST story I’ve read on this site so far! I really enjoyed the plot, and Xavier seems like a total sweetheart! I loved their chemistry and I could really feel the love through your brilliant writing. I loved this story so much, I had to read the entire thing for 2 hours straight! Now I’ll head to bed feeling happy and contented by the ending, which is a rare result for me when finishing a story. Honestly, I could go on just talking about how perfect this story is that I had to come out here and write my first ever comment! This made me shed some tears, thank you for sharing author! 😭🫶