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AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago
sentence construction needs a lot of work

too many repeated words in the same sentences.........

a lot of the sentences are just too long and without proper use of , . and their friends

other than that it could be a good story

chytownchytownabout 2 years ago

***Nice short start.

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