All Comments on 'House Rules Pt. 01'

The piss thing was horrible, it was such a great story.

Totally ruined it at the end when he was pissing in his mom's mouth

The story and concept were really good until Monica likes to drink Mike's piss. I’m not into that, so I won’t be reading more.

Weird story it is

good start but why have her drinking his piss ruined the story

Liked it until the Mom drinks Piss.

not bad at all, but I not like piss drink theme

WTH dude?

The drinking piss undid everything good about the story.

I'm not gonna bash anyone for not liking the piss thing. It's not for everyone. But it's kinda funny to me how the same people who obviously have an incest fetish think the piss fetish is weird. If you don't like it, that's fine. But it's not what I'd call constructive criticism XD

Hey lad! Please tell me you'll keep going? Pleaaaase? I LOVE this idea of rulebook and i love how you tell it and what you do with it... Perhaps go a bit more into the "hates it but has no choice other than accepting it" kinda path? That would make it sooo much hotter... Please i would crave more chapters for this series, really... Tell me this ain't the last... I want more from this, and i want more deviance too... X)

Hey man love the story hope you keep it going , i think the rulebook idea is fresh and unique and i love how you didn't just do simple "jessica fucks me" or anything like that , The whole piss thing isn't for me but then again this story isn't for me , love your writing man i hope you continue

Loved the story, can't wait to see what happens next.

For those who got pissed off, author had already put the relevant tags.

Also really enjoyed this one. Keep it up!

This is a good start. I like the way that all 3 train at the same time.

Instead of using the book to nail his sister he decides to piss in his mother's mouth? He needs to check his priorities.

I love these types of stories. Great start. I look forward to the next one.

I like your stories, I am looking forward to the next chapter. Thanks for your all work.

looks good at least for now. wonder if it will be just one-time story like your other story though.

Well now that he has everything set up. He needs to add to it that any guests will also follow the House Rules and think nothing of it.

I liked the story so far and the main premise. I hope to see more chapters in the future.

However, if you allow me one constructive comment. I think you didn't actually add a rule for Monica to have sex with Mike, which creates a conflict with the next rules;

"4. Monica feels it is her duty as a mother to give Mike a good show by dressing slutty for him in the house.

6. Monica doesn't want Jessica to know about her sexual relations with Mike, because she is afraid that Jessica would be appalled by incest.

7. Monica is really bad at hiding her sexual relations with Mike from Jessica, though she doesn't realize it herself."

Love it! though, the images don't seem to be working?

Cant wait for the next chapter ,great story love the piss too .

It was an odd story kind of hard to follow and where does it all lead too? You need to continue with more! Gave it 3 stars!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Amazing story. Would love for more parts

Loved everything except the piss. Sorry, but that's just not sexy at all. Really gross actually. Even with the grammar errors, I was going to give it a 5 star. That grossed me out such that I can't justify more than a 2 star. Like it or not, I have to accept that you get to write what you think is sexy. But the rating system is for us to give feedback. I hope chapter 2 is more sexy, and less gross.

No more puss please

Loved the premise but you lost me when it came to the pissing. If you had posted an author's note stating that the story included water sports, I would have skipped it. Two stars.

Idk why people hate the best part, the pissing was actually I shot the load, it was the best part of the entire story

NO WATERWORKS

KIA

Cum has piss in it, chicks or guy cum both have piss, so every one of you that hated the piss STOP READING EROTIC OR GROW UP! Yup every cum shot, every blow job, every squirt from a babe is or has piss mixed in.

NOW YOU KNOW! I'm dying of laughter here at the poor kids that didn't know..

Piss? Freaks!!