All Comments on 'HouseKeeping'

I enjoyed reading this sweet little story. Thank you for writing it so well and welcome to Literotica. I hope you will write much more for us. Well done -- please have four stars.

Fantastic story. I thoroughly enjoyed this.... Your going to do fine here I added you to favorite in author and story. Looking out for new works from you..... nice detail...

I'd LOVE to find a job like that!!! Well done!

amb (that's me!)

CAN NOT WAIT TO READ MORE FROM YOU. 5 STARS

Excellent. Only one fault for me - I would like the sex to have arrived on the second or third visit. Like the guy I enjoy the tease and we would both have had more fun with her denying them until later. Good work.

Love the start of this

that made me

Outstanding job of building the storyline with likeable characters.

Loved the storytelling but a little surprised the sex started so soon as the build up could have continued for several chapters....

The tease came through loud and clear in your story. Makes me wish I had the means to have this happen for me. But in the meanwhile, on to chapter 2