by Tony155
This was an excellent story to read and enjoy. It had real plot and structure and the author obviously took the time to do it right. I'll be watching for more.
What a great change of pace. So many author's forget that romance is just as sexy as anything else. The characters are straightforward and interesting. The story is well-written and solid. I hope to see more from the writer soon.
if it were possible. This is one of the best stories I've read here lately.
nice storytelling. I really enjoyed it and I look forward to reading more of your work.
nice tale well told. only question i had was about the accident - he was permanantly disabled by that drunk driver, shouldn't get disablity? it would help then get started in the new life.
... what a nicely told story. I've enjoyed your other stories and have read this one twice now. I'll need to read it a few more times to get caught up to the number of times I've read "Bowl Me Over", "Blind Date for Eric" and "Brenda & Ian."
Somehow, I knew before I read it that one of them would be injured. The long road trips indicated it. There was good character development, making Keri and Zeke real people not just figments of imagination.
Thank you for another fine story.
J.
I not know much about baseball,but I do know a superbly written story when I read one,and this is one.This writer gets better(if that is possible) with every new story.
Missed changing the score thermometer from 50 to 100.
Corrected now.
J.
PS if any of you reading the comments have not checked Tony155's other stories, do so now. It will be worth your time.
This was a beautifully written story, well thought out and tender. I have read some of your other work, and although i have not commented on it before i thought that it was one of the best stories that i have read on this site. Thank you for an enjoyable reading experrience.
a lovely, heartwarming love story. i started out by reading 'drumbeats' and am now reading your other stories, and this doesn't disappoint. even though i somehow predicted that he was going to have an accident, it was still nice to find out how they were going to deal with it. what i like about your characters is that they are average people - not perfectly gorgeous with super DD breasts or extra long dicks. thanks tony for a beautiful story.
Now, finally, we have a story from you where you really could write a Part Two! Well, come on, then... =P
I've read several of your other stories, and when I found this one I knew I was in for a treat. You didn't disappoint me. As a former ballplayer who didn't make it that far I identified closely with the emotions. Very well done. Jerry
Good story, well written except there should have been a good proofreader.
de Jay
Not in my usual reading but I'm finding I like them more and more.
Please continue the story, they are just getting started.
Ramjet
BTW being intubated on a ventilator automatically put a patients category as Critical, and admitted to an ICU. With a quick up grade once extubated.
I loved this one. It is the first story I've read from you, but I've bookmarked your story page. The one thing missing from the story was the lawsuit. He was a promising ball player who would have made a lot of money if he had made it to the Reds, but his career was cut short by a reckless driver.
I noticed that your Biography page has not been updated since 2012. Did you finish the book you wanted to write and did it get published?
One of the best stories I've read on Lit.
I hope you are doing well in this pandemic.
I just loved the storyline. The story was well paced as their love grew. At the end it had a fairly good ending, but not what I had hoped for, where it indicated a happily ever after for the two it in my opinion should have at least gotten to the relocation and marriage. At any rate it was a 5-star story. Well done!
Many stories I've read on this side that start out describing a budding romantic relationship, descend into recounts of cheap porn movies as soon as it comes to sex. Worse, often one partner, mostly the male, turns out to be mostly thrilled by having someone to dominate and demean.
I'm grateful for every contribution showing the protagonists having sex in a loving and spontaneous way. Doing what comes naturally, from experiences, from living the moment and as an expression of their feelings for each ever. Simplifying the matter, for me to be satisfying the mc's have to see eye to eye for a romantic story to work. I've found this in several of Tony155's stories and will just keep tearing through them. Thanks for many an enjoyable read!
It's one of my all-time favorites. I am an ICU nurse and almost all the ZEKE ICU experience is totally wrong, but that's OK you just don't know author. jgstansell@yahoo.com
The medical information was absolutely wrong, but I loved it anyway. 5 stars