by saddletramp1956
Another amazing story from the tramp! You cover so many different genres with equal believability, hard to imagine. I can't wait to read what happens to Houston. My privilege to be the first reviewer on this one, Something that often happens due to my freakish 2am wake-up time. I am busy wrapping up my 'Just Call her Brooke' continuation on LW. Had to hurry before YOU offered to finish it, lol.
I was moving the page and while moving it hit the one star, and I wanted to hit the five stars. It’s too bad I cannot change what is already accidentally input.
Thank You, you are one of the BEST !!! I never miss reading your tales. They are very good and I always get sucked into them.
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Oscar Warren is one of the characters that should be indestructible. Please keep him around to keep things under control.
Riveting, and probably truer than many realize. I can't wait for the next part!
But . . . openly discussing Top Secret (and beyond) black ops stuff in a restaurant? At best, they should all lose any clearances that they hold.
I know this is fiction and just for fun, willing suspension of disbelief and all that, but c'mon.
After reading the Houston series this is a disappointment. It seems to be getting more and more unbelievable. Not that a crooked US Senator is unbelievable. All of these resources devoted to the MMAS is crazy. Plus this senator know all about this top secret agency and it's prior operations is hard to believe. I know your writing the story and you do whatever, so I'll just read.
..of light escapism entertainment. Always a good read, thanks ST.
This could be a great story. Look forward to the next chapter Thanks.
Another great beginning to the outstanding adventures of Oscar Warren and Herman Munster. Looking forward to the coming installments.
Awesome story! I can always count on you for a fun romp - bring on Pt. 02... 5*
Dad blast it, you're a good writer. You got my attention. I can't wait to find out what comes next.
I just hope we don't have long to wait.
5 STARS!!!
Thanks..
EWWW Eating shit?? Really? Shouldn't this be in fetish? It seems to me you're now just trying to gross your readers out.
I did enjoy the last/first/other John and Houston story. I thought this first chapter felt a little flat almost too contrived. I'm not sure about dragging MMAS into it was a great idea I know you said you would at the start. I'm obviously not a fan I personally think you took that too far beyond reason. I just hope you don't do too many more tie-ins. I really don't think that John and Houston meet Justice would work and I'd hate to see you try it. Sorry no stars for this chapter but I'm pretty sure it's not gonna concern you in any way bt see how it goes.
Another one
Another good start to what I am sure will be a great story. 5/5
@DSM, The guy was not eating shit, his wonderful wife shit in his mouth so he could choke and die. I like the MMAS stories as well Ranger Justice. Who knows maybe he will show to help John save Houston from the Senator.
You have hooked me with this one, so looking forward to the next chapter!!!
Having friends who actively participated in the cold war, I expected Regis to refer to the Russians as communists still. As for the Chinese...