All Comments on 'Houston: The Girl Of His Dreams Pt. 01'

It's better than your usual lately. The dream sequences seem little more than filler though. We shall see. If they don't somehow relate to the overall plot then they really don't serve a purpose. Just because John is in a coma isn't a free pass to write entirely unrelated fantasy. It can be a fantastical presentation of what is actually happening, that is common too but it can't just be a sex fantasy out of Heavy Metal. -starsong1977

As always - Thank you! 5*

Patiently waiting for more.

Have been patiently waiting for something new in the MMAS world

houston will beat the brakes off that bitch

That was too short. It was just starting to get really interesting when it stopped. I could read saddletramp for an hour if it was available. You have another good one going here and I’m looking forward to more.

Great story Tramp. My only issue is that it leave us hanging. I am sure that is by design so we are breathlessly awaiting your next installment. Regardless given your reputation I am sure it will be worth the wait. Your previous stories in my opinion are all top shelf, 6 stars. Please keep up the great work and don’t let the haters deter you. Very entertaining.

Nam Vet

Well the opening dream sequences threw me for a bit, but then happily the story settled down. Enjoying thus far and looking forward to further development of the plot.

Thus far we score 5/5.

5* from me, but c'mon, you can't leave us hanging.....

Well, so far it sucks!..The 'Tramp' generally writes a story, not just a piece of one.Wonder how many parts this will be?

YOUR THE BEST SADDLE TRAMP! AGAIN, 5 STARS!

Right on the edge

of my seat, when the next line said "To be continued" I said damn.

5/5 as usual.

@starsong1977,

why can't it be a free pass, is that some rule somewhere, or just your preference?

I had to read a lot to get myself back up to speed. 5*

It amazes me again and again how you manage to write such essential stories. Tension and with the right dose of betrayal, deviousness and meanness and of course with the right shot of sex! Bravo! I followed the plot with joy and excitement! I'm looking forward to the next chapter!

I'm surprised that more wasn't made of the British backup disappearing when the trap was sprung.

Another great ST tale, looking forward to the next part!

5 stars again

A great addition to the Houston series, keep it up!!

Pity about the inaccuracy of having trains from Euston go to Birmingham Snow Hill. To do that means changing trains at Birmingham New Street. Still, it is fiction...…..At least they didn't go from Paddington - that would have needed time travel back 60+ years!

A very solid start. My sense is that there’s more than one episode to follow.

Excellent! Like the way Regis got to the Heart of the matter. Now to have Houston kick ass on her U.K. sub-bordinate.

Intriguing!!!

Just love the drama of this series, then again it is a story written by saddletramp who is one of the best writers here on Lit. This series with these 2 characters John and Houston Smith are quite an intriguing duo. Well done 5/5

Fucking stupid

ST, you are one of the best writers on Literotica that I have come across. In the spy thriller genre, you are THE best. You normally finish all your stories. But how come this story ends here? It's definitely not finished. Please complete it. Thank you.