All Comments on 'How Do I Atone'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago

So sorry I wasted my time on this heap of garbage I couldn't even finish.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
WOW I thought this might have been worthwhile...NOT!

As a retired US Navy sailor (Chief) and 100% heterosexual type guy this is all just mumbo jumbo bullshit. Maybe comic books are more your speed.

patilliepatillieabout 9 years ago
He said he is into it, yeah tell him.

Sit him down and explain it all, or have him read your story, that is probably the simplest way to go.

Nice job, well done, a 4.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Some really really fucked up people.

I think you told the story well, and mostly believable, which is unfortunate. The woman really fucked up, but sounds remorseful. Since I can't relate to any of these people, these thoughts, and these actions, it is just too difficult to embrace this as a good story. This is too well done to rate poorly, but just too ugly and sad to rate highly. So I won't rate it at all. In fact I think I'm running out the door and hope to forget this sick story as soon as possible. Just too much to cope with right now.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Man hating bitch!!!!!!!

All your stories. Are the same your a cheating ho and slut who hate men . Your the wife that will always find a reason to cheat.it will always be someone's else to blame but your the man hater,If I did this to my husband I would kill myself, what loving wife on here would do this to her loving and devoted husband. I don't think you could fool a real man long enough to trick him into marring you, but if you did and he read your stories he would run 1 star

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago

What the fuck?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
in a word

no not if you dont want you and mark both fucked up and lose a hubby

ChagrinedChagrinedabout 9 years ago
How do you atone?

Well, writing a letter to your husband telling him what you did, or having the guts to do it personally, followed by eating a bullet would be a good start!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
stories of the mentally ill arent erotic

they just call for sterilization

impo_60impo_60about 9 years ago
Cheating....

She is a cheater and having the husband she has, she should confess clearly and suffer the real consequences...1*

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
quite the day

retardation is the only word that comes to mind for all writers on this day.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Only one way to atone for what she has done -

NEVER mention it or write about it again. Ever. Really.

rightbankrightbankabout 9 years ago
"SHOULD I TELL HIM?-----"

I'm sorry you told us!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
That thing in your mouth...

...is spelled "T O N G U E." Geez.

BigBlue9295BigBlue9295about 8 years ago
Hated it

Very few stories have made me feel this way. I really hate the characters and what they did to a returning soldier. I hope this is the feeling you were trying to achieve,

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
One of the worst stories on here

Forget the cheating this is such pretentious bullshit it's almost unreadable.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Dreck

A new low - a faggotty cuck husband

iameaseliameaselover 3 years ago

USDA Grade A pure shit.

26thNC26thNCover 3 years ago
Awful

Scores for this garbage have to be artificially high. It was truly awful.

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