by returningsaiilor
As a retired US Navy sailor (Chief) and 100% heterosexual type guy this is all just mumbo jumbo bullshit. Maybe comic books are more your speed.
Sit him down and explain it all, or have him read your story, that is probably the simplest way to go.
Nice job, well done, a 4.
I think you told the story well, and mostly believable, which is unfortunate. The woman really fucked up, but sounds remorseful. Since I can't relate to any of these people, these thoughts, and these actions, it is just too difficult to embrace this as a good story. This is too well done to rate poorly, but just too ugly and sad to rate highly. So I won't rate it at all. In fact I think I'm running out the door and hope to forget this sick story as soon as possible. Just too much to cope with right now.
All your stories. Are the same your a cheating ho and slut who hate men . Your the wife that will always find a reason to cheat.it will always be someone's else to blame but your the man hater,If I did this to my husband I would kill myself, what loving wife on here would do this to her loving and devoted husband. I don't think you could fool a real man long enough to trick him into marring you, but if you did and he read your stories he would run 1 star
no not if you dont want you and mark both fucked up and lose a hubby
Well, writing a letter to your husband telling him what you did, or having the guts to do it personally, followed by eating a bullet would be a good start!
She is a cheater and having the husband she has, she should confess clearly and suffer the real consequences...1*
retardation is the only word that comes to mind for all writers on this day.
NEVER mention it or write about it again. Ever. Really.
Very few stories have made me feel this way. I really hate the characters and what they did to a returning soldier. I hope this is the feeling you were trying to achieve,
Forget the cheating this is such pretentious bullshit it's almost unreadable.
Scores for this garbage have to be artificially high. It was truly awful.