by milfocker
As I explain in my New Story Review on the Author's Hangout of Lit Forums, I can not understand how this poorly written waste of a potentially interesting plot rates an "H".
The story wasn't bad but lacked the "HEAT" like the stories "Naughty High Class Mom" part 1&2
This story is just the kind I love to read (or write)! A young guy impregnates his mother-in-law & plays with her ample breasts in the process. And in this case, the MIL gets pregnant before the wife does--one hot story indeed!
Keep it up,
R.M.
This author must be writing his own reviews. I agree with Sir Hugs in that nobody but the author himself would rate this anywhere near a 4.5 let along at least ten people giving anything higher than a two.
Probably the dumbest story on Literotica! Stupid premise. One million pounds? Get a grip... the couple probably could have been bought for 1,000 pounds. Plus, it's a TV crew filming and the couple says about their spouses, "We'd never tell them, so they'll never know."
A better, more believable story would have been this whole scenario as a set-up so the S-I-L could trick his M-I-L into screwing him (he stages a phony TV crew working for a phony TV show).
In too many of these stories people just fuck with no consequences. We must face up to reality every once in a while and realize that babies are the natural consequences of sex.
I fucked my mother inlaw knocked up sametime as my wife we been sleeping together three of us in king size bed told my wife and her mom want two more kids from both of you now both of them each 3 kids each now mother inlaw wanted tubes tide my wife did too the 3 of us always fucking